Chapter 3 Pages 59-63

Five new pages this week. Read on from last week here.

I submitted some pages for constructive criticism over at The Webcomic List and Whitechappel. White chappel appears to be a deadzone, but I got some useful feedback from TWL. It is the same feedback i got from Cloe C, which is that my line work is too too ugly. I decided I should stop just saying “yes, I know.” and try to do something about it, so while the first 2 pages of this update are in the same Line art style as you are used to, the last 3 pages are my attempt at a new improved line.

I don’t think it changes the look of the comic much at all, but I do feel it makes for subtley more pleasing art and in general a more dynamic looking page. Let me know what you think.

Till next week.